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||Rus
Всем привет, мы тут с моим очень хорошим другом нарисовали коллаб.
С недавних пор мы очень любим жанр Вестрн. Моя любовь к этому связана с просмотром аниме Триган.
И вот, наконец-то, я могу с точностью сказать, что Шика - OC аниме Триган. Но У меня так же будут и другие персонажи из других аниме.
Вообще, Максим, мой друг, можно сказать, воплотил мою мечту в реальность.
Я всегда мечтала о том, чтобы у меня появился друг, с которым мы могли бы рисовать коллабы.
Я очень благодарна ему за эту работу.
Надеюсь, вам понравится С:
||Eng
Hello everyone, my very good friend and me drew this collab.
Recently, we like the style of Westren very much. My love for this is connected with watching the anime of Trigan.
And now, at last, I can say with certainty that Shika is an OC anime of Trigan. But I will also have other characters from other animes.
In general, Maxim, my friend, made my dream come true.
I always dreamed that I had a friend with whom we could draw collabs.
I am very grateful to him for this work.
I hope you will enjoy! C:
Shika © By Shika
Maks © By TakedaRei
Program: Paint Tool Sai |
User: Bamboo Pen Wacom| Mouse
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© 2017 - 2024 Shika122
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Oh woah, really cool image overall, the poses are really cool, and looks like it could be some sort of poster for something! 
Like a few weeks ago I watched some episodes of cowboy beebop english dub while drawing. (Stopped with that, I barely knew what was happening. xD) But this reminds me of that.
I think the thing I like best is how you did the perspective on the hand of the girl you added the most lines on!~
#1 It's not really a critique on the art but, have you ever considered saving images as a .png or like a higher level .jpeg?
Most people may not notice it (but I'm one of those that does xD), but when you save it as a lower level jpeg, the image will get splotchy spots? (I think they'e called artifacts or noise)
When zoomed in it's a lot more noticable.
:origin()/pre07/0371/th/pre/f/2017/237/3/4/jpeg_by_voiii-dbl8cde.png)
#2 I think your shading could be darker in some areas.
Right now it doesn't have much contrast. A way to help you see this a bit better is to greyscale your image when done.
When you grey scale the image, it's really hard to tell there is any shading on their skin (especially for the girl) and the guys shirt could also use a bit more contrasting.
#3 For the girl, the head...for the angle of her head I think the face is misplaced? Is this suppose to be a 3/4 view face or a front view face?
If it's suppose to be a 3/4 view face, her facial features seem to be off center?
Like there's more empty space on the side that should be smaller? If that makes sense?
If it's front view, I think all you really need to do is give her a bit more of a jaw.
I also think her head may be a tiny bit too big? (I am someone that struggles so much with big heads myself. ; w ; )
:origin()/pre13/5ec8/th/pre/f/2017/237/e/5/2_by_voiii-dbl8cfb.jpg)
#4 I don't think I'm strong enough of an artist to help you out with this part, but the girls pose does come off a bit awkward?
My best guess on what you could do is, the collar bone I think could be more angled then it already is?
ANd I think having her one shoulder/arm come down a bit would be good as well.
Perhaps trying to make the shape of her rib cage more visable as well?
:origin()/pre10/3d7e/th/pre/f/2017/237/2/2/3_by_voiii-dbl8cdg.jpg)
Hopefully that seems helpful! ; w ;
I'm sorry if it wasn't please forgive me if that's the case!
I do think you did a really nice job, keep up the good work!
Like a few weeks ago I watched some episodes of cowboy beebop english dub while drawing. (Stopped with that, I barely knew what was happening. xD) But this reminds me of that.
I think the thing I like best is how you did the perspective on the hand of the girl you added the most lines on!~
#1 It's not really a critique on the art but, have you ever considered saving images as a .png or like a higher level .jpeg?
Most people may not notice it (but I'm one of those that does xD), but when you save it as a lower level jpeg, the image will get splotchy spots? (I think they'e called artifacts or noise)
When zoomed in it's a lot more noticable.
#2 I think your shading could be darker in some areas.
Right now it doesn't have much contrast. A way to help you see this a bit better is to greyscale your image when done.
When you grey scale the image, it's really hard to tell there is any shading on their skin (especially for the girl) and the guys shirt could also use a bit more contrasting.
#3 For the girl, the head...for the angle of her head I think the face is misplaced? Is this suppose to be a 3/4 view face or a front view face?
If it's suppose to be a 3/4 view face, her facial features seem to be off center?
Like there's more empty space on the side that should be smaller? If that makes sense?
If it's front view, I think all you really need to do is give her a bit more of a jaw.
I also think her head may be a tiny bit too big? (I am someone that struggles so much with big heads myself. ; w ; )
#4 I don't think I'm strong enough of an artist to help you out with this part, but the girls pose does come off a bit awkward?
My best guess on what you could do is, the collar bone I think could be more angled then it already is?
ANd I think having her one shoulder/arm come down a bit would be good as well.
Perhaps trying to make the shape of her rib cage more visable as well?
Hopefully that seems helpful! ; w ;
I'm sorry if it wasn't please forgive me if that's the case!
I do think you did a really nice job, keep up the good work!